Lesson 5 of 6
Write a clear profile bio
Learning objectives
- Understand what a bio actually has to do
- Use a simple, repeatable bio formula
- Avoid the most common bio mistakes
- Publish a bio you can use across MEM, social and your website
What a bio is actually for
A coach bio is not a CV. Its only job is to make the right person think "this coach is for me" within 5 seconds. That means it has to lead with WHO you help and WHAT outcome you deliver, not with how many certifications you hold.
Credentials matter — but later, after trust is created.
A simple bio formula
Try this structure: 1) one sentence on who you help and what outcome you deliver, 2) one or two sentences of credibility (story or experience), 3) what working with you looks like or who it is for, 4) a clear call to action.
Short, specific, in plain English. No jargon, no "results-driven holistic transformation" — speak like a human.
Common bio mistakes
Avoid: opening with your qualifications, listing every modality you offer, writing in third person when nothing else on your profile is, using buzzwords no client uses, or trying to appeal to everyone. Each one quietly costs you clients.
Read your bio out loud. If it sounds like a brochure, rewrite it.
Founder insight — Derrick Twum
The coach profiles that convert best on MEM are not the most decorated — they are the clearest. A clear bio outperforms an impressive one every time.
Key takeaway
A clear, niche-led bio in plain English will convert more prospects than a long CV-style bio packed with credentials.
Reflection questions
- 1Does your current bio open with your client or with you?
- 2Would your niche client recognise themselves in the first line?
- 3What jargon are you using that you could cut?
- 4Where is the call to action in your current bio?
Action task
Write a new 4-part bio using the formula and publish it on your MEM coach profile.
Worksheet
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